 ICF
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Date: May 8, 2004 @ 2:27 PM
Just before you post whats wrong with it .... I know about the weired sound in the background but i have no idea how to get that out at the mo, This like all of the others is a work in progress but ive put it up anyway. Sorry about the sad singing at the moment its just a phase!  cya x
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 Intergalacti...
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Date: May 8, 2004 @ 3:06 PM
Heya, hope its not about me but it rules.
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ICF
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Date: May 8, 2004 @ 3:39 PM
Well if i said its not would you believe me anyway? mmmm no lol 
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sqrlcub
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Date: May 8, 2004 @ 3:56 PM
Very nice song. My friend here likes it too. IT's hard to understand all of the words.
I really liked the main body chord progression. It is nice hearing things that take you away from where you expect them.
This song really wants an outro since it ends abruptly. It sounds like you end on a dominant/subdominant of the chorus key which doesn't have that final resolution. The outro could really take care of that to make it sound like it resolves.
The lyrics that I can understand are really beautiful. It sounds like you are really feeling them too. I love the sad singing and your tone. Great job.
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Intergalacti...
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Date: May 9, 2004 @ 4:27 PM
Well who said you can't get me and it still rules
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ICF
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Date: May 9, 2004 @ 4:30 PM
Three letters d-e-l, and thank you, i do think its good myself  
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BedroomSessions
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Date: May 10, 2004 @ 5:34 PM
i like this, its nice, like the piano progression...its a grower for sure it gets progressively better (at the start i was worried it would be lame)
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greatscottpr...
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Date: May 13, 2004 @ 12:29 PM
 
   
 
  
 
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cryo-e
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Date: May 14, 2004 @ 1:08 PM
Love the song  , but then i'm a sucker for piano
Would love to hear a better produced version of this
Either way, it's going on my pl
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 ChaosSurfer
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Date: May 14, 2004 @ 2:47 PM
 I'm also a sucker for a piano x I'm guessing the noise is coming from your cables  I once picked up Radio 1 on mine
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ronnie71
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Date: May 17, 2004 @ 2:20 AM
nice litlle song would like to hear the finished product..
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 Laden7
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Date: May 17, 2004 @ 1:17 PM
Hey there, miss.
I'm a sucker for a piano AND for writing English (I'm danish), so please excuse me. I just wanna say that your songs and playing is very moving. I usually doesn't like listening to this kind of music, but what you're doing is really good. Kinda melancolic.
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TheBite
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Date: May 18, 2004 @ 3:42 PM
I really like this song. The piano is beautifully sad and dripping with dismal goo. Very nice vocals as well, especially when you hold out the notes, that's where your voice really sounds good. I personally think the best songs that come from the heart is when I'm sad or pissed off. There seems to be a creative door way that is opened up, sometimes with great results, and that is what this song proves. Good job!
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ebarbarella
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Date: May 20, 2004 @ 3:15 PM
 the piano  Beautiful! and very nice vocals too!
Enjoyed!
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independentm...
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Date: May 23, 2004 @ 9:55 AM
To me the noise is some kind of "noise reduction" improperly applied, or an encoding problem when transfered to mp3 format... Does the original recording sound that way? Does a pure version of the original recording exist? If you could send me a copy of the most original version you have of the song I will try to mix/fix/encode it as an mp3 file (and even in wav and CD audio formats too) free of charge. This is a good song that deserves to be heard in the best possible light.
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vucky
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Date: May 24, 2004 @ 12:01 PM
This is goood, the singing and the piano. I love piano all my life. It's my favorite instrument. And I really enjoy acoustic songs. 
Who play the piano btw?
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Aliensane
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Date: May 25, 2004 @ 2:12 AM
Hello there! I love the piano and I love your voice. Let's do a duo. I didn't get to hear the whole song but I liked what I heard.
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ShakerGreen
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Date: May 25, 2004 @ 9:03 PM
Did the guy that inspired "this song" inspire any others, break-ups are great for that kinda thing, and you can always tell a real song that has guts and emotions over a fabricated "pop" song.
good job!
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ps-I-forgot
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Date: May 26, 2004 @ 2:36 AM
I really liked the piano chords and the melody for this.
The pianos sounded smooth and the notes floated and weren't choppy.
Pretty good.
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 onewhodreams
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Date: May 28, 2004 @ 1:43 PM
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Intergalacti...
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Date: May 29, 2004 @ 12:52 PM
The guy that inspired this song wants her she just doesnt believe him.
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T-Boi
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Date: May 30, 2004 @ 3:01 PM
Vocals very pure. very nice intonation. piano recorded like in some place chambered. echos in the vocal would be good for this song. the lyric is also good. great song 
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WallyWally
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Date: June 5, 2004 @ 8:56 PM
i like it a lot. great content, obviously could use a bit of noise reduction. want to hear more, though. love your style
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Emosideproject
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Date: June 21, 2004 @ 5:19 PM
this is amazing.
any guy would be stupid not to want you <3
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BedroomSessions
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Date: June 23, 2004 @ 5:21 AM
hehehe...he called you stupid IWH
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ICF
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Date: June 23, 2004 @ 1:26 PM
 oi, dont do that on my comments
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cosmicearthgirl
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Date: June 29, 2004 @ 11:20 AM
 Very moving, but beautiful.
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 soundsseeker
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Date: June 30, 2004 @ 4:41 PM
you have a very pretty voice.. the
is nice... really feeling your mood... here...
"This is a good song that deserves to be heard in the best possible light."
yep... sounds like a good deal
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imemine
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Date: July 28, 2004 @ 12:15 PM
Very lamenting piano progression and melancholic vocal sound. I feel the confusion and pain in the soul of this song. Many a song has been created out of these situations and I suspect that your music is a coping mechanism like it is for many artists. We are a troubled sort, aren’t we? I commend your ability to speak so freely about your feelings in song!!  
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Pagan
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Date: July 28, 2004 @ 12:37 PM
I can totally relate.I can feel the emotion in this song I love when someone can make me feel that. I love beautiful haunting piano. Sounds like a 3 0-clock in the morning song. very nice .cant wait to peep more.
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FraDonaghy
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Date: August 7, 2004 @ 6:50 PM
Nice and eerie sound going on here, which echoes the sentiment of the song. I can picture this is some weird film where a wife ends up killing her husband and while she's driving away from the scene this song would be playing. Totally irrelevent info there, but I am a pretty irrelevent person.
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jamind
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Date: August 17, 2004 @ 9:20 AM
dark and engaging... your voice is pretty... it's a bit like early Cure stuff... The album they did after 17 Seconds with Other Voices on it... beautiful stuff.
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xz3n1rik
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Date: August 30, 2004 @ 1:54 AM
Hey The Cure Owns!! Don't forget that.
I finally got the chance to listen, its absolutely beautiful. I Love your voice.
Yea, that sound in that background is the result of encoding compression-it's no biggy tho. TMPGENC is free a video editing proggy that works with sound too. It has a feature called noise reduction that would take that right out.
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ryanwilliams
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Date: September 4, 2004 @ 1:26 PM
Gorgeous tune, very sad (I've been there!) I know what that noise is, and given the choice between it and the former, I'd rather hear that, so no prob there. That chord progression is something, man, I dig it
all around.
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 Net-Lard
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Date: September 10, 2004 @ 11:59 AM
i like it, the way its only the piano gives it that, "performing live" feel.. very nice
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Dizeazed
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Date: September 10, 2004 @ 7:35 PM
Was that you playing that lovely melody on those ivories? This song was pretty decent. It only being an acapella with the piano in the background narrows the listeners ears down and makes them focus on the emotion of the track.
Well done for a lady of your age.
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billrhynes
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Date: September 25, 2004 @ 4:46 PM
This is really beautiful. Are those tears falling on the keys...very nice voice and lyrics too.
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 Vickxxx
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Date: October 2, 2004 @ 1:41 PM
Love the sad voice and lyrics. Piano is haunting. A very bittersweet track. Good work
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 Msc-MaMi
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Date: October 10, 2004 @ 2:06 PM
Such a pretty piano melody. I l0ove it. And the lyricssss!This is pretty decent,the lyrics are very g0od.
Yesh,ive been there as well s0o i understand the sad feelin to it. G0od job though!
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Notary04
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Date: October 23, 2004 @ 2:26 PM
Yeah, a real beaut of a piano melody. I love your voice, I just wish it were better recorded so's I could understand all the lyrics...nice finish...like an Osprey busting out of the Mckenzie river only to discover that the fish it had pursued with such longing had slipped from its grasp!
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justinother1
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Date: October 26, 2004 @ 12:56 PM
the best music comes from the heart. this is real. this creates a mood.
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moam
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Date: November 1, 2004 @ 9:38 PM
Great singing Loving the piano This is a beautiful song :hearbeat:
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tsand19151
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Date: November 12, 2004 @ 2:15 AM
nice, very nice........
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Mike-Bowers
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Date: February 11, 2005 @ 5:18 PM
Really cool... like the piano, and love the vocals, very clean.
Nice one!
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anathorn
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Date: March 9, 2005 @ 3:35 PM
Very nice! I like it! good work!
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blurredthots
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Date: March 23, 2005 @ 7:24 PM
awesome job!!  this song rocks :yup:
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EllyKellner
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Date: April 25, 2005 @ 2:28 PM
You wrote "Written about a guy who sadly didnt want me"
Guys should want us!!! We're great!!!
We are amazing creatures and we make wonderful music. Believe it girl.
This tune has a very nice melody and good singing, keep on practicing to get the breathing right. No need to go get singinglessons, I've not had any and I think you don't need any!
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GTOriginal
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Date: July 22, 2005 @ 9:37 AM
Listen to Elly she is smart as hell. Becuse guys do want you, no two ways about it Anyway,  X 100
About the song. Emotional singing (of course) and playing. It comes straight from the  and that's exactly where it ends up too.
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Intergalacti...
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Date: July 31, 2005 @ 3:14 PM
Guys do want her she is great
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SimonWaldram
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Date: December 2, 2005 @ 2:12 PM
The main piano motif is really hauntingly beautiful. I'm impressed by the way the verses do the ascending and then descending thing, and the chorus...well it's brilliant - you've really come up with a timeless sounding melody and there's so much emotion in your voice. Obviously it needs a proper ending, maybe even another verse and chorus to round off the story, but as a work in progress this is very impressive. How any guy could reject you, by the way, is absolute mystery to me.
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